jolusoji 38 #1 Posted May 11, 2013 Guys.What do think about it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
peacemak3r 1,351 #2 Posted May 11, 2013 The 4th window at the right I think is too much...but I guess if you couple it as ABBA then it wouldn't look too bad. Personally not my cup of tea. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #3 Posted May 11, 2013 okay.I made the changes to the windows.It smaller.The mta logo is new and added a second car Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #4 Posted May 11, 2013 Here a another one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fan Railer 1,491 #5 Posted May 12, 2013 try one with 5 doors 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Threxx 1,833 #6 Posted May 12, 2013 I personally like the third one. It reminds me of the R40 Slants... it would be a good design for an A car in an A-B-B-A set. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #7 Posted May 12, 2013 I personally like the third one. It reminds me of the R40 Slants... it would be a good design for an A car in an A-B-B-A set. coming right up 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Quill Depot 1,569 #8 Posted May 13, 2013 Nice slant! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #9 Posted May 13, 2013 try one with 5 doors Here it is 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #10 Posted May 26, 2013 here is a more realistic version.I try to make like the R68/A .give feedback 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broadway Local 482 #11 Posted May 30, 2013 That is a good drawing, indeed! Just make sure that the isn't a window at the back of the train. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #12 Posted May 31, 2013 That is a good drawing, indeed! Just make sure that the isn't a window at the back of the train. I made the updates.The window of the back of the train is removed.It is replaced by a cab window and a logo other touches are Doors are a little wider.The train number plate and USA flag is added and the door lights are new,and the rollsigns.Any more feedback.Thanks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #13 Posted May 31, 2013 Nice slant! thanks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #15 Posted June 16, 2013 Here is 2 more.What do you think about it?Need feedback Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4P3607 1,075 #17 Posted July 13, 2013 I can't see any of them except the last one, I like the last one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #18 Posted July 13, 2013 I can't see any of them except the last one, I like the last one. I reupload the pictures Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #20 Posted July 20, 2013 here a new one Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #21 Posted July 22, 2013 here a updated version Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #22 Posted July 22, 2013 here some variants here a updated version here are some variants 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jolusoji 38 #24 Posted September 12, 2013 check out my video all of sketches and some Mta buses/trains http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvz6dcQnyas&feature=youtu.be Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Broadway Local 482 #25 Posted September 15, 2013 You might want to take a look at some photos so that your color, and design is placed in the right place. But if you are actually showing your fantasy train, then it's alright. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
