[poem] Despido Final

[Y2Julio 206]

Despido Final

By Julio C.

 

despido final

 

cada dia mas que pasa, contigo a su lado y no conmigo,

es un golpe mas a mi corason con el martillo

que clava el clavo mas profundo en mi

si tu te casas con el, sera el golpe fatal para mi

en este verso, que yo escribi para ti

 

sera el ultimo despido a ti,

sera el ultimo adios que escucharas

con estas palabras acceptare que jamas

seras para mi seras para mi

 

que es mejor resignarme y aceptar la derrota

aceptar este cruel destino en esta vida loca

pedir a dios que traiga mi final

porque es lo mismo,que sin ti estar

 

y al fin matar este dolor en mi

la mujer que antes por cual era mi razon para vivir

ahora es la razon por cual yo me quiero morir

que sin ti no sere feliz

que sin ti para que vivir?

 

a la misma vez que deseo habarte conocido

antes que tu conociera a el

tambien deseo jamas haberte conocido, ni pensar en tu piel

de esta vida ya no puedo aguantar

mas dolor y desamor

por eso le pido a dios que traiga mi muertepor favor

no tenerte a ti y estar muerto y al fin matar este dolor

 

y eso sera el ultimo despido de mi para ti,

y eso sera el ultimo adios que escucharas salir de mi

que para donde me voy,

jamas me volveras a ver, ni volver a escuchar mi voz

adios, te deseo lo mejor

adios, te quiero amor

adios, nunca te olvidare

adios..un dia de estos morire

[N-Trizzy2609 11]

This is soo good though I can't read some of it because I can't understand some of it! lol.

 

I like it thoo

 

Mui Grasias (terrible for a Puerto Rican huh?)

[Y2Julio 206]

Let me guess, born here?

[N-Trizzy2609 11]

Yup!

[Y2Julio 206]

I could translate it to English but I'm not sure if it would keep it's general mood.

[Y2Julio 206]

Here it is in English. Man, it sounds super emo lol

 

Final Goodbye

 

With each day that passes by, you with him instead of me

is a another hit more towards my heart with the hammer

that hammers down the nail deeper inside of me.

If you were to marry him, it would be a fatal blow for me

In this verse, that I wrote for you

 

It will be the last farewell for you,

It will be the last goodbye you'll hear.

With these words I'll accept that you'll never

be mine, be mine.

 

That it's better to resign and accept defeat.

Accept this cruel destiny in this crazy life.

Ask god to bring my end

because it would the same as not having you

and at last kill this pain inside of mi.

 

The woman that used to be mi reason to live

now is the reason for which I wish to die.

Without you, I wont be happy

without you, why live?

 

At the same time that I wish I had met you

before you met him

I also wish that I had never met you, nor think about your skin

of this life I can no longer cope

with more pain and unlove

it is because of this, that I ask god to bring my death

Not have you, be dead and finally kill this pain

 

and this will be the last farewell for you

and this will be the last goodbye you'll hear from me

where I'm going

you'll never see me again nor hear my voice

Goodbye, I wish you the best

Goodbye, I love you my love

Goodbye, I'll never forget you

Goodbye, one of these days I'll die.

[Cait Sith 9,753]

Great job......I felt the mood of that poem. So deep and lonely. Honestly, it relates to alot of things some people would actually think at their time like that...

 

Awesome job!

[RokuSix 3]

I felt the mood perfectly fine in English. I really love it...though it makes me feel awfully sad.

[Y2Julio 206]

I felt the mood perfectly fine in English. I really love it...though it makes me feel awfully sad.

That's Bachata for you (Spanish version of the blues), It's all about desamor (unlove). I need to stop being lazy and finally make it into a song.

[JJr142 0]

Knew the spanish words, It made me feel the same way. (eso no me hace llorar, pero yo soy triste). What i was saying was, it doesnt make me cry, but it makes me sad. From Puerto Rico.

[Pablo M 201 35]

Ta bueno ta bueno. Para mi, me gusto mucho!

[Y2Julio 206]

Ta bueno ta bueno. Para mi, me gusto mucho!

Gracias!

[Paul P 0]

It does have a mood in English!

[7LineFan 256]

Wow, great poem.

 

And yeah, kinda emo, especially if you set it to music made by a band with two guitars, a bass, a drum set, and a vocalist... then you may have millions of teenage girls singing along to it...

[Y2Julio 206]

lol well I made it for some spanish blues.

[buswizard 93]

It is very sad. But it was also a good poem

[MTR Admiralty 4]

Very good!

Still keeps the mood even in English.

Wish I took Spanish instead of French.