Jump to content
Attention: In order to reply to messages, create topics, have access to other features of the community you must sign up for an account.
Sign in to follow this  
FamousNYLover

What do you think of my speech against MTA and Westchester County Bee-Line Bus

Recommended Posts

usally when a rfer talks it confuses people, which is fun lol

 

I might as well do this in the bronx..

 

Do they allow us to advice on elmanating certain services.? I would love to elimanate the <4> at 138th... JUST USELESS!!!

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Yuki, no offence to you, but the MTA would pay more attention if you put the proper articles such as "the" "an" "a". The MTA would understand you better if you do otherwise.

I will, myself, write my own speech listing my grievances.

usally when a rfer talks it confuses people, which is fun lol

 

I might as well do this in the bronx..

 

Do they allow us to advice on elmanating certain services.? I would love to elimanate the <4> at 138th... JUST USELESS!!!

The diamond 4, is needed. It will cause a bottleneck if it does not exist.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
I fixed few and spell mistakes.

Slighly off-topic, anyone coming to Sheraton LGA Meeting>

 

Not sure. Yuki, you should get a list of grievances from everyone here, that will make it an effective argument.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
No Offense,

I feel you would need a few grammer and spelling corrections...

It looks like an effective article when it is corrected.

says the person that misspelled grammar when telling someone else that they need spelling corrections. oh the irony!

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
No Offense,

I feel you would need a few grammer and spelling corrections...

It looks like an effective article when it is corrected.

 

It's more than grammar.

I feel it is not that convincing, especially if you look it from the MTA's point of view. It takes a certain degree of eloquence to raise a single ear within the MTA board for hearing your voice.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Sorry If I came off mean but I would like to have two minutes of my life back. From taking Oral Communications and Public Speaking at LAGCC, my advice is to break down your speech. In addition, you want to point out the most important details. I highly recommend brainstorming and figuring out what you want to talk about.

 

Remember in all due respect 33rd and other members English is not Famous NY Lover aka Yuki first spoken or native language. Yuki only been living in the US for about 7-8 years now. Please keep that in mind.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Restore formatting

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

Sign in to follow this  

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Terms of Use.