Urbanfortitude Posted May 24, 2009 Share #1 Posted May 24, 2009 poetry is not my strong suit but for some reason i couldn't help myself. Just somethin random I wrote...comments, thoughts, criticism...knock yourself out. it starts with the first couple of steps the momentum picks up and I'm taken with it the heart beats with the anticipation that in moments I'll feel like I'm soaring the only sounds I hear are the sounds of my feet as I'm taken by the feeling and just like that I'm off running the heart thrives off this feeling in my mind, I have no idea where I will stop I just know that I have to keep going I'm hooked, like an addict who needs his fix the wind pushes against me as I go but it can't stop me for my spirit lives for this every breath gives me the strength to keep running I've reached my limit going as fast as I can go but the mind says "No! Faster!" so I keep pushing everything around me is a blur suddenly it's like another world, one that exists for me to keep pushing my feet I can go on like this forever it feels like in my mind I've left the ground soaring on wings of an angel my heart beats fast, my face soaked in sweat but I'm at peace just because I'm running Others who see me try to keep up I can hear them breathing I can feel them coming this brings another feeling...I'm getting excited the urge to call the challenge comes and I'm impulsed to dare them to catch me the steely grin appears on my face just then and I can't help myself the running has taken over me and I feel untouchable I can't tell how far I've gone the thrill has blinded me of all sense of logic but i know I've come a long way it feels like I'm coming up on a finish line the heart is beating in hyperdrive so that I can take those steps to cross i feel a pull on me as if my body is trying to stop all this but I'm almost there and won't be averted a few more steps and there...i feel the sensation like i've reached the goal my mind unintentionally set for me the sounds of my feet have ceased i have to take in the surroundings and know where i am i look for a moment and see where I've come but no sooner have i stopped does the feeling come again the burning sensation from deep inside coming to a boil I realize my feet have a will of their own I can't stop them and I don't want to a deep breath is taken and it starts all over again once again I've taken off....running Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R32 3348 Posted May 24, 2009 Share #2 Posted May 24, 2009 Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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